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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Lines of strain Sea of bane View my stain Hearts of dreary Bones of weary Taste my query Blood of bone Whisper of drone Body of stone Life of blame Extracting claim Feel my shame Wet of tears Solidified fears Abyss of arrears |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
love the flow and the way you wrote it I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I really like this. You never cease to amze on your vast amount of talent |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
nicely written and to the point >>>phantom poet<< |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
like condensed milk, sweet in it's concentration |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting write..the short lines and associated idea conveyed becoming a sum of many smalls to create something much larger... enjoyed |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
The short lines and the rhyme scheme added to the intensity of the read, thanks for sharing this with us  Andrew |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great format! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A pondering write, this...thank you, Susan... |
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