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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-03-06 02:57 PM


Words dangle
like fresh meat
dripping life
devouring
sinew and bone
seducing
incomplete
til lips
red with life
meet

Rf


© Copyright 2003 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-03-06 03:13 PM


Robert, a lot said in a few words...I enjoyed...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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2 posted 2003-03-06 03:15 PM


nice form... it suits you...

well done sir..


1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2003-03-06 05:51 PM


so........did you want a kiss? ok smooooch...helen (giggle)
wandering glider
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aloft
4 posted 2003-03-06 07:03 PM


juicy !
in a wet-apatite kind of way
I like it !

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Saluting with misty eyes
5 posted 2003-03-06 07:24 PM


Very descriptive. I enjoyed it.
Phantom Poet
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6 posted 2003-03-06 07:30 PM


Enjoyed your write!! and thoughts!!
         >>phantom poet<<

Martie
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7 posted 2003-03-06 10:35 PM


Robert...enjoyed the form and the thought.  
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2003-03-06 10:47 PM


Reads like a tremble...
Excellent! ThisDiamond

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2003-03-06 10:51 PM



No constraints...
in my thanks...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2003-03-06 10:54 PM


Love it...
very very nice!
~hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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