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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2003-03-06 02:19 PM

Hey Guys.

Just wanted to see if this one holds any chance of being published..

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The time has come, Oh unseen one,
Oh soul of mine I trust.
The unseen land past the gate of death awaits you,
as I breathe this final breath..

At this moment, I lie in pain,
at the end of a life NOT lived in vain!
Pondering that which awaits me soon,
When this heart beats no more..

I know not fear at this time now,
but glorious anticipation.
I'm going to soon find out just what exactly is our destination.

My dying heart trembles with wonderous delight,
I lay in my bed to die tonight.
The time has come, Oh unseen one!
I think we're going to be alright.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

1 posted 2003-03-06 02:30 PM

Great stuff!
Definetly publishing material.

Sperari

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-06 03:26 PM

Joseph, I think that all type poetry will make it into the book. You wrote this very well, even if it did make me sad..

Hugs,
Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-06 08:04 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joseph, any poem that makes me cry or laugh is one worthy for the book in my point of view, your poetry is always so honest and makes you feel emotions therefore I proudly place my vote for this! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my prayers are with those needing faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-03-07 09:51 PM

a worthy choice to reflect your writing in the book...you have my vote and best wishes that it makes it.

peace & poetry

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-03-07 10:06 PM

If you can evoke that kind of emotion in me--whether it be glad--or sad as this one did--you're right on track!

Warm hugs for a heavy heart,
EA

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-03-07 10:09 PM

YES but, I have always enjoyed your writings....enjoyed....

Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-07 11:56 PM

Eagle - what a nice twist - is lovely - xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 03:29 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-03-08 12:26 PM

My unseen one~ says it all.
What a nice take~

I want to go like that~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-03-08 02:13 AM

good write!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2003-04-04 02:55 PM

enjoyed

Charisma

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

11 posted 2003-04-15 09:51 PM

This is so sad

but very good it got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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