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sperarifraai
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since 2003-03-06
Posts 65
Ireland

0 posted 2003-03-06 01:35 PM


Well there you are
Ready to pack up
And ready to go
New prospects arrive
And your gone like a shot from a gun
In the great land rush of 2001

I look behind you
See what’s already there
Will you look up one day with an empty stare
And hope against hope it is as it where

I never did believe in sentimentality
But these days I don’t believe the past is what’s gone
These days I believe it’s a song
To keep me strong
To get along
Not to do me wrong
In a solemn dawn

Sperari

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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2003-03-06 02:28 PM


these would do well as lyrics for a song.. i was thinking of catchy riffs for this.. good stuff.. man

gesundheit

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-03-06 06:37 PM


yea these would definitely make a good song.
I'm sure I'll hear them someday! I better!
great write.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Phantom Poet
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 116
Arizona USA
3 posted 2003-03-06 07:35 PM


Enjoyed your write!! and thoughts!!
         >>phantom poet<<

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