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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-12 06:54 AM



Moments Of Time

moments
are all allowed
but I
shall take these
and string them
together
like pearls
of time
to wear
against
my skin


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-03-12 04:48 PM


Oh wow...this is so lovely.
Eric

Amara
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2 posted 2003-03-12 06:37 PM


Oh, I like this! Stringing moments together like pearls...oh, very nice!

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

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3 posted 2003-03-12 06:39 PM


such moments indeed should be treasured and kept close..
you again in a few words open up a great deal for the reader to consider...

nicely done..

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-03-12 07:20 PM


helen, my fave of yours, this is so special, in to my library. xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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