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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-06 01:27 PM



Beauty eyes
Dancing across the floor,
Looking good
Leave me wanting more
Can never see you in the light of day
Can never love you
Can't you see
You're my Beauty eyes
You're my fantasy, Just a fantasy

Beauty eyes
Hair flowing long
Loving you
How can that be wrong
Can't you see what you mean to me
Can you see me
Hear me when I say
You're my beauty eyes
You're my fantasy, Just a fantasy

Beauty eyes
Falling in too deep
Lying next to me
Love as strong as the sea
When I wake up you're still not mine
Baby, why can't you
Be what I need
You're my beauty eyes
You're my fantasy, Just a fantasy

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2003-03-06 02:33 PM


Fantasy through miracle fades gracefully..
into reality!

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-06 03:24 PM


Ringo, I like that fantasy very often turns into reality....

Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-06 04:28 PM


Enjoyed...James
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-03-06 05:08 PM


I enjoyed this one, I could hear it as a song.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-06 05:21 PM


A fantasy can become a reality! Keep that thought!

~ May your pleasant dreams come to reflect your reality!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
6 posted 2003-03-06 07:20 PM


Thanks for all the kind words...
Actually, Pilgrimage, It is a song... kind of...
The band I am in is working on a concept album and this is one of the songs... almost

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-03-06 10:59 PM


nothing wrong with a fantasy - sometimes even better than the real thing, real thing
gets boring

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-03-07 11:11 PM



Ringo - I love this! Is passionate and so very true - nice writing there xxoo

lol @ Michele

Suetang
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9 posted 2003-03-07 11:15 PM


Hello Bradly

Fantasy or not, this was fabulous and I really enjoyed it.

"Love......
to melt and be like
a running brook that
sings its melody
to the night."

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2003-03-07 11:19 PM


Ringo - nice write, liked the beauty eyes tied in with a fantasy...

BC

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11 posted 2003-03-08 02:24 AM


wonderful write...
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12 posted 2003-03-08 03:01 AM


Very lyrical, if I had a shred of musical talent I would be tempted to put music to it.
Much enjoyed.

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