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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-06 01:13 PM



Fly straight, Fly right
You play your games night after night
You hold me down with all your sin
Then promise you won't do it again
What did you say, what do I do
When we're exhbits in the human zoo
Iv'e got the heart, I've got my dreams
You couldn't care less it seems
I won't let life pass me by
It's time for me to fly

Argue up, Argue down, Your excuses seem to abound
You cry about that, you bitch about this
It's gotten so bad I can't dismiss
Do what I tell you, Do as I say
I'll be here to command you another day
Never right, I'm always wrong
You'll be a star if I pull you along
I'm tired of dealing with the pain
Time to fly again

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-06 01:23 PM


wow this gets right to the point!!!
i like it!!!!

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GG
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2 posted 2003-03-06 05:35 PM


outstanding job, can clearly see you wanting to fly right away!
Though, I guess, for some people the battle can only be walked, waded, and fought, through. We all just need to be there for eachother!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-03-08 07:49 PM


Time to soar high ... yes.... maybe together!
Very well expressed.
Margherita

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4 posted 2003-03-09 03:03 AM


yep! I say that too!
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