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Alone in your chill
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Alone in your chill |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Alone in the chill scraping the blame from minds window like morning frost never fails to return havock upon the hair gets in my eyes opposition like wind so hard to defeat i am never there in those moments dislocate my thoughts to warn them to run. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"dislocate my thoughts to warn them to run." I sure can relate to this line, gemma. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Alone in the chill scraping the blame from minds window like morning frost never fails to return Gemma I get so excited to see your name here, with lines and images like these your words always capture me |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
scraping the blame from minds window *********************************** That is about as descriptive as you can get. Very very good job. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
morning thoughts settle in softer with the promise of spring - waiting for birds to come back to the window, good thoughts, good poem  |
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