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Just Nothing..(Winds Challenge)
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Just Nothing..(Winds Challenge) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
In writing this poem, I'm feeling depleted, Hoping and praying it won't be deleted. It doesn't have sex or passion or hate, Just making words rhyme as I try to relate. It has little meaning, just a word here and there, No thoughts or real meaning that I'm trying to share Just some "BS" and words that may rhyme, Just kind of writin' and wastin' my time. I guess I could say I'm doing something, But in reality, I'm writin' 'bout nothing. My paragraphs show it's written in verse, If I put my mind to it, it'd surely be worse. So if you're reading this poem Act like you're doing something, If someone asks what you're reading, Say: "Oh it's just NOTHING.. [This message has been edited by Toerag (03-06-2003 11:14 AM).] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well you can do 'nothing' more cleverly than anyone I know......your nothing made me smile......lol....so thank you for nothing *big smile* [This message has been edited by jellybeans (03-06-2003 11:13 AM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL that's a whole lotta nuttin'! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, You made something out of nothing, LOL not easy to do. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Toe, your nothing was really something!!!!! Hugs, Ethel  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Your poems are always "something"  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How could I keep my angel kisses from someone as sweet and deserving as you! This was adorable---and not deplorable! You can say sweet nothings any time you like. We'll all be listening! Warm angel hugs & kisses, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-08-2003 08:23 AM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe..it's impossible for you to write nothing...for you are something!  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Nope! This is everything.... for it makes me smile.... thanks for the morning grin  Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'So if you're reading this poem Act like you're doing something, If someone asks what you're reading, Say: "Oh it's just NOTHING..' LOL...say it all the time! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There are times when my boss can be such a jerk I'm reading your poems - she wants me to work! But I know what's something, my priorities Are set on these verses you write with such ease. So if I'm doing nothing as I sit and read... For more "nothing" time, I do humbly plead!! I love this, sweets... and I thank you for the smiles! *S* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno, it's all your fault that I've been humming "I've got plenty of nothing" all day! LOL But it's kept a smile on my face... and that's good! *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
chuckling... nicely done Toe... now..I must get myself back to doing somethingl |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Giggling. Nothing worth responding too but you sure made it look and sound good!! Hugs, Marti |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Ha! It's just a little nuthin', but I like it anyway. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 That was good. I guess. (just kidding, it was funny Toe-Jamthe Wind is invisible. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
nothing but air . . . excellent! w.g. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I have nothing to add.  (you did great by the way!) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No one is more qualified to write about nothing than you, Toe. I like your pink lettering....fits you, somehow  |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Enjoyed your write!! and thoughts!! >>phantom poet<< |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent Toe!! lol. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
This is so cute, I have a book titled Nothing, inside it is blank pages,,,,nice write, I enjoyed nothing |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
loved this, lol, clever stuff. Peace |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
But...there's always something to say and you made that point clear. Sometimes it does not have to be grand... just something from the heart. Deb |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What am I doing here? Didn't I have something to do?... Nah.. Nothing...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no sex???no passion???no hate??? is there nothing here to read? you are always a good read even if you have nothing (worthwhile)to say *s M |
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