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Noontime Pertness |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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'twas noon daringly, she turned to her lover- showing him the door he packed his bag and left he didn't think, not once, to blame the time of day **** **** **** ..circa 2002..Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites ..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spiros, Very Cheeky, enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...reminds me of the time my lover...or should I say my tormentor threw soome of my clothes in the front yard and I calmly packed the rest and left never to return...I think it was about six pm...who knows...James |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\.. + JamesMichael../\.. ..thank you for reading my poem; i appreciate your comments.. ../\..Spiros -----------------poetry-------- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I have seen these things happen to others in the city, dearest friend, it is not a pleasant sight and I always cry when I think of those who are left on their own, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-06-2003 08:07 PM).] |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Mistletoe Angel../\..thank you for reading my poem; always nice to have a comment from you.. ../\..Spiros --------trees------- |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - Lost track of time, did they?...  |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A wonderful read, thanks for sharing |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH!! I enjoyed this...ooooh yesss. ~Hugs and a Vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...for it was noon, so no more spoon... May you enjoy the rest of your day! Earth Angel |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Nan../\.Marshalzu../\..Enchantress../\.. + Earth Angel../\.. ..thank you, much, for all your nice comments; i'm so pleased you have read my poem.. ../\..Spiros ------------------calm------- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Spiros - this is utterly amazing - xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 03:28 AM).] |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Time of day hmmm No it is usually just me  Much enjoyed, thanks |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
a very good book sumission....  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
littlewing../\..sea_of_okc../\..garysgirl ../\.. + passing shadows../\.. ..certainly is very nice of you, all, to comment; thank you for reading my poem; is much appreciated.. ../\..Spiros -----------trees--------- |
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