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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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bells of sleigh jangle jingle in my time bells of ringing cresting to a river's break recorder marks silver of the waves come dancing breaking leaves of dollar bills taunting me yes taunting me into a deeper nod of some other understand... breath solidified in air the only time that you'll see warmth in proof--- watch the fog I breathe of you. dancing fingers in despair. come here closer feel my sway say it's not so anyway wrap the scarves that bind my hips and tie them to you on the wrist--- oh I can make you dance. A tiny bell upon my toe foot-flowers dancing in meadow there is buzz of life in me... mud splays patterns on my feet stomping in a childish glee-- watch the fog? I breathe of you. in absurdity come dancing I will wait for you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am sure he will fill up your dance card pretty fast once he reads this bit of whimsy! Have a glorious day dancing with him and to the delightful beat of your own drum... EA |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Very musical writing, rolls from the tongue! Sperari |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome serenity!! "Rings on her fingers, and bells on her toes..she shall have music wherever she goes." Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K as always leave me in awe - xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity This is the first time I enjoyed a mud bath. LOL |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'A tiny bell upon my toe foot-flowers dancing in meadow there is buzz of life in me...' And a much needed touch of hope... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I loved this, Karen.....and I just couldn't resist....     Loveya,  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-06-2003 11:27 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I love this. Jeff Beck had a song called "Come Dancing". I can't remember if it was just an instrumental or not, but I think it was. The title of this reminded me of that. Man, I'm old!  And this is just grand! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love this! You always have such amazing images... and now I want to danceeee Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Or? An old "Kinks" tune Cool, witch! ~yeti |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Yah... I know I'm redundant. I loved it.  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ya gotta love this! I'm smiling from ear to ear.... you dance beautifully Karen. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I love the entire gypsy of it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
does the funky chicken count as a dance? Cause i can do that one |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity~ Lets meet on the river bank and dance in the mud while the ships play the music with their fog horns & bells. Just joking. I really enjoyed this...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow...Paulie? y'startled me again... and? I have lived near enough the river my entire life to hear the riverboat calliope... and it really IS enchanting... thanks all...sometimes I just "go places" in me mind and wanna bring ya'll with me... (and yep, wranx...I smiled when I chose the title...ah...the kinks.  ) to forum. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed..james |
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