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sweetwater
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0 posted 2003-03-06 01:26 AM


A poem about nothing

Nothing means not a thing to be found inside the room
Nothing means to not exist, at all I would assume
Nothing means a zero or a nil if talking sport
Nothing takes you nowhere, and should be let go fast, if caught.
Nothing can be something if a child doth speak the word
in response to a parents call when there’s nothing to be heard.
You can find it in a spoken word or even in a letter
And nothing might be easier, but something would be better.


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prof.pishnu
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1 posted 2003-03-06 03:11 AM


nothingness makes a good piece of writing has a lil touch of attitude. lol  write another one :P allllllllllll about nothing :P
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2 posted 2003-03-06 07:41 AM


That was my challenge! Glad to see you took it. It was absolutely haunting.

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        remeber me

sweetwater
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3 posted 2003-03-06 07:50 AM


yep, sorry Wind I didn't acknowledge you, thanks for putting up the challenge.. this was the first one I even attempted.. great topic!

Peace

sperarifraai
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4 posted 2003-03-06 08:02 AM


Very good
(But if there is a room for nothing to be found in surely that equates to something

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-06 10:19 AM


Your "nothing" certainly turned out to be "something"!--A very interesting write!

Warm morning hugs,
Earth Angel

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-06 10:23 AM


sweetwater
A very good write, enjoyed.

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-03-06 10:25 AM


Sweetwater, I really like your "Nothing" poem that surely turned into "something"...

Hugs,
Ethel

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