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In Serenade of Quaking Aspens
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In Serenade of Quaking Aspens |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How soft the breezes blow upon my cheek In all the ways to know connections that I seek Turned into wells that surface clear and pure Each time reminded of the reasons to endure Always there beneath these lowered lids to peek A world so large and loud, a mind to find times meek Through shake and bake of sun and storm stands tall Amid the quivers danced in colors form an ever-bearing wall The crowning glory of a rich and noble dream Away from tempest squalls un-tampered baste and seam How good reminders to think broad in reach and reap White trimmed trunks to posture footings thoroughly in seep How soft the breeze remains to comfort here In chase of wanderings and echoes fauna fleet to cheer And given in a velvet purse to soothe the ripples out How soft the breeze that blows the trees in sharing round about Copyright Kkh 3/5/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
always these exquisite images from your words finding beauty in the natural world before us |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Always there beneath these lowered lids to peek A world so large and loud, a mind to find times meek Through shake and bake of sun and storm stands tall Amid the quivers danced in colors form an ever-bearing wall Your words never fail TD~ Thank you always for sharing your gift of poetry, it is endearing and so very special. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay! Oh Kathleen, I just love aspens, I am so fortunate to have many of these golden sentinels here in Colorado as the mountains are basically speckled with them! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this vision, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing, this has my golden vote! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is outstanding. I love the flow of this. I can feel it! Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"In Serenade of Quaking Aspens"---the title alone is sheer poetry!---your poem was the icing on the cake! Warm hugs, EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, what a beautiful choice for book submission. I love it, as I do all your poetry.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title attracted me... and am I glad it did! *S* This is absolutely lovely! *S* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is just stunning. Enjoyed this very much.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ A dream is a wish your heart makes ~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very lyrical! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...I seem to use the word "beautiful", alot with your poetry...and this one really is that. Not to mention the way it flows when read...yes it is lyrical, although that's already been said..it's true. Gorgeous! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! just beautiful! "check" |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
So, so lovely... fantastic imagery. You do have a way of finding the beautiful and penning it for the rest of us the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kathleen This was absolutely stunning and most certainly gets my vote. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Salt New Member
since 2003-03-19
Posts 9 |
Beautiful imagery, but how can it not be with a subject as beautiful as nature! Nice post! Peace |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The imagary is breathtaking....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank goodness this popped back up... I would not have wanted to miss it! However, I do want to HOLD it...so...  |
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