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Ever Onward
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Ever Onward |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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Once in a dream Floating high, drifting ever onward I saw the battle rage below Armies clashing, rushing ever onward Into the killing zone Behind the hate Battlefield, flags fly ever onward I saw the young man's blood flow lady Valkarie, flying ever onward To take the faithful home The killing's done Dying screams, floating ever onward The broken bodies lie in death Kings will call the armies ever onward To go and fight again |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
This is a harder one to interpret, hummm although the clip of final fnatasy, where shes in the dream and the soldiers are running into battle with her in the middle, accept they all died, reminiscent of knights I think ahh many thoughts many questions. Was this written with anyone in mind? Im still trying to grasp it ahh i like it  its a thinker ( for me anyway) |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
No, no one in particular... just a bit of medieval fantasy... Actually, it is very losely based on a song by Styx called "Castle Walls" |
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