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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-03-05 10:10 PM

To Hear The Call

Single seasons come, yet cycles remain
hearken still winds, heed lonely call's refrain
streaming through like silver in gold dusk’s light
sliver of shivers, protecting this night

Blanket frost of white, coverlet of earth
passions lay low below, imminent birth
receive all what is, yet fight all to live
accept when to take, and when then to give

Snow geese on winged way, breaking sky with ease,
seeking summer, finds winter no release
eyes his lifelong mate, side by side in blue
faith filling cycles, mating of the true

Hear the call, tears fill of pellucid peace
Giving all, garner precious, sweet release

revised from 02.10.01

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2003-03-05 10:14 PM

Hello Karilea

This was absolutely gorgeous and so very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-05 10:30 PM

Very very beautiful Karilea...
Lovely images you've painted here.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-03-05 10:39 PM

lovely words as always, like the gesse i find no release in this winter, bring on spring already

Ellen
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 35

4 posted 2003-03-05 11:01 PM

Sunshine,

I loved this, a very beautiful poem, It made me long for Summer to get here...Thanks for sharing

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2003-03-05 11:34 PM

Karilea, this is just beautiful. I love it.

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

6 posted 2003-03-06 02:25 AM

i loved the last coupletm but I truly felt the stiflingness of winter through this poem.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-03-06 07:35 AM

Enjoyed...James

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2003-03-06 08:14 AM

..Sunshine../\..very good poem; very calming;

i enjoy reading your poems../\..Spiros
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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-03-06 08:17 AM

So descriptive and filling.
This is so beautiful.
Thanks,
Eric

sperarifraai
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since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

10 posted 2003-03-06 08:17 AM

Excellent imagery used here, very wintery!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-03-06 10:25 AM

The calls of the wild are far better cries than the ones to arm!

This was a graceful and gentle write.

Warm morning hugs,
EA

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