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Open Poetry #25

We Walk On Edges

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-03-05 06:10 PM

We walk on edges.

Surrendering to a fall.

The night holds no fear of dawn.
It simply opens of itself
to the coming days
embrace.

The day in turn will face its own end.

We are the twilight and the dawn.
The night and the day.
The past and the future.

We walk on edges.

On the verge of always
becoming.

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

1 posted 2003-03-05 06:12 PM

wow this got my attention!!!
>>phantom poet<<<

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-05 06:57 PM

Ericc - I love this - always becoming - soo true - is a hard task though walking that line TY

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

3 posted 2003-03-05 07:26 PM

Balancing ourselves along the edge of re-discovering ourselves... almost too afraid to allow ourselves to fall into Who we truly Are...

I close my eyes... and I fall freely into the depths of my Self.

A thought-provoking, beautiful poem.

Thank you for opening our minds and souls yet again.

Love,
Moca

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

4 posted 2003-03-09 05:57 PM

Yes we do walk on edges... and I lost my safety net a long time ago.

I do love your poetry. It is superb.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-03-09 06:09 PM

Your poem is like a comforting embrace .... we are in the flow, surrendering to the constant becoming.
The twilight holds melancholy, even if it is displayed in magnificence .... and the hope of dawn makes us trust again to walk on the edge ...
Outstanding beauty.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart