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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-03-05 05:24 PM



Lost

Desolate I am
this has become obvious
No sign of anyone

The only tracks that I can find
seem to be mine
in a circle I have gone

What must I be doing wrong?
Lost within myself and this God forsaken land
Water and food to eat

But no company to keep
ghost my memories have become
long the days feel to me

soon only third person speech
so I may have someone to whom I my speak
giggles erupt I am obscured and out of the way

Who will come to save me?
from my wandering ways
am I damned to repeat these mistakes?

Redemption seems the way a path paved with good intentions will lead right
OR will I be warmed by Hells fire this night



© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-03-05 05:42 PM


Thomas,
Difficult to says what symbols will return in the night. Enjoyed the read.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-03-05 06:56 PM


Thomas - God I know how you feel - excellent xxoo
Ladies_Rogue
New Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 7
Mississippi
3 posted 2003-03-06 02:25 PM


Tom you were right
This web site is cool
Love your poem
Henry

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