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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-05 04:37 PM

Once I roamed
the makeshift jungle
one with nature
lithe but strong

Now I lay
teeth bared fierce
upon this floor
an empty skin

A throw rug

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-03-05 04:42 PM

(chuckling).... there are teh comic images to this and a deeper underlying message as well... I enjoyed

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

2 posted 2003-03-05 04:54 PM

love/it
>>>phantom poet<<

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-03-05 05:03 PM

rise again, please, the world will be a better place

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-03-05 05:29 PM

I feel the same way when I see animal skin rugs.
It creeped me out every time I went to a friend's house where there were several of them on the walls and on the floor!

Your poem is unique and has a very important message inherent in it.

I could hear their silent pained cries...

Warm hugs,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-05-2003 05:30 PM).]

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

5 posted 2003-03-05 05:35 PM

tossed but not forgotten . . . :-0

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-03-05 06:04 PM

You didn't tell me you were in town for Mardi Gras...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-05 06:44 PM

Raph - I identify with this more than you know - no - you do know - an excellent ode to loneliness and abandonment. Always amazing sweety - keep your head up xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-03-05 08:26 PM

thanks Cpat appreciate it

thanks phantom

mish thanks wish it were true or possible

thank you linda for hearing and reading

hope not wandering

wish I were need a little fun and debauchery to forget..life(?)

Sue a little more to it than that but i like different interpretations

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-05 10:48 PM

explain to me? For an era that once was? Someone you used to be?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-03-05 11:07 PM

a wild panther now a just empty dead kitty skin..nevermind i need another drink

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-03-05 11:52 PM

nooooooooooooooooo - no no no
*hand goes to mouth*
cmere

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