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Open Poetry #25

The Crimson Fountain

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-03-05 04:09 PM

This heart a crimson fountain shed
While love awaits your dancing feet
My fears your favorite color red
Flow from your muse like poison sweet

Drip drip my life seeps out
And stains the earth before the sound
the rushing waters of your words
Wash all my passions to the ground

Rf

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-03-05 04:20 PM

flow from your muse like poison sweet...

nice line... like the sound of it and the images it brings to mind..the half thoughts behind it...

enjoyed

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

2 posted 2003-03-05 04:34 PM

gee i'm breathless after this write!!
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Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2003-03-05 04:54 PM

I don't believe I have read any of your poems before this one
Now I regret that mistake but am willing to correct it.
Thomas

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

4 posted 2003-03-05 05:06 PM

Thomas, thanks! not prolific as most...so shouldn't take long to digest

Rf

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