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Open Poetry #25

demand for spring

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:23 PM

i stand here
and make demands
zephyr breezes
consume this cold
blast down upon me
with sun touched
clouds loaded
with rainbows
and soft warm rain
to devour this snow
and give breath to these yearnings
bring spring on the waft
of a dream
kissed with daffodils
and violets
lose the chill
make me soggy
with humid relief

[This message has been edited by abbe (03-05-2003 02:37 PM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-03-05 02:51 PM

now I really like winter...
but you just made me go all for spring, this is excellent espeically the imagery.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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