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Open Poetry #25

i cant stomach your words

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-05 12:00 PM

The leaf you turned is older
the changes have all died
been plucked and thrown to sky

the nauseating patterns of loops
as you make your way to my ground
and you look so far away from my eyes

delicate suprise youre not so fragile
the shards of cold your whole face exudes
little girl lost whos been found a thousand times

throwing your words i swallow
i'm as hurt as you, comforting every shaking bone
you believe that mine dont break

pushes away all who hurt themselves to protect her
ignored and wrongly accused i've become one of them
pathetic for me who loved her til this end

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-03-05 12:04 PM

Pain, hurt, anger... You have portrayed them all very convincingly... good job

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-03-05 12:50 PM

Gemma you weave words and images with grace,
a beautiful ache

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-03-05 12:54 PM

I feel the ache in this

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-03-05 08:31 PM

bump

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-06 02:01 AM

Hi Gemma, this is a very well-written
Poem. I enjoyed it...
Ethel

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-03-06 08:10 AM

Very powerful.
Eric

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