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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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0 posted 2003-03-05 11:24 AM



Days melt into night
Night into dawn
Seconds jump to minutes
This life of mine has gone

Minutes like an hour
an hour much too long
Hours until eternity
Forgive me with a song



© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-03-05 11:29 AM


littlewing
Your fogiven, enjoyed.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-03-05 12:39 PM


they say things get better...
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-03-05 12:46 PM


very good...I do know the feeling here
Phantom Poet
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 116
Arizona USA
4 posted 2003-03-05 12:48 PM


nicely done!!
>>>phantom poet<<

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-03-05 02:31 PM


Shadows Phantom & Seymour Ty so much - forgiven - yes I do need that TY

Raph - Im here - they were getting better
xxoo

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