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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-03-05 07:02 AM


A thought for you

Let us speak in terms of peace.
I do not ask you sign a lease.
I only ask you tame your mind.
And let it think in soft of kind.

Just let it drift valleys green
With flowers littering the scene.
Lay you down a moment’s bliss
Perhaps with ghost of former kiss.

Think upon rebuttals ground.
Let your mind be subtle crowned.
Lift your eyes into the blue.
See of those that love you true.

Be at peace a moment’s flight
Weather it be day or night.
Put it in your treasure chest.
And keep it as a moment blessed.

It will weigh upon your goal.
And vent its vent within your soul.



© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunkissed
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1 posted 2003-03-05 07:06 AM


Seymour, as I read, I felt as if I were being gently taken to paradise.

Beautiful.


Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

GG
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2 posted 2003-03-05 07:10 AM


good to start out my day with something so peaceful as this, thank you... but ack, you've already posted, it can't be morning yet, can it?! I still need to sleep!
Thank you for this,

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-03-05 07:16 AM


only ask you tame your mind.
And let it think in soft of kind.

very lovely words, Sy *s
M

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-03-05 07:41 AM


Sunkissed
A beautiful reply, thank you.

Alyssa,
You got time for a catnap.

Marti,
Thank you sweet. And for you a morning

Cerenity
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5 posted 2003-03-05 08:01 AM


Hey Sy,

Beautifully done write here, I knew you would start my day off so very wonderful.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-05 08:15 AM


Cerenity
My pleasure,

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-05 08:17 AM


Top of the morning to you, Dear sonneteer! You truly are a blessing to  us all. It is a privilege to be able to start each day off with your golden mots.

Peace, Shalom, Namaste, Pax, Pais...
Loving hugs,
EA


Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-03-05 08:37 AM


Thank you for the beautiful morning read Sy!
Made me smile on this blustery white winter morning.
Stop a moment for a spot of tea?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Sunshine
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9 posted 2003-03-05 08:48 AM


Never quite sure whether to enjoy these with my morning tea; or wait till late in the evening, to fall in line with the peace...

Thank you, our Sy...

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10 posted 2003-03-05 09:55 AM


Seymour - Great thoughts here. If all of us could take even five minutes out of our day to center ourselves, be quiet, and just feel the universe cradling us. Toast & Marmalade this snowy morning? hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

regards2you
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11 posted 2003-03-05 10:27 AM



Sy,

Wonderful. No reason we can't read this morning, noon and night!

Loved it! Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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12 posted 2003-03-05 10:32 AM


Seymour, I'm so glad that you were at the very top today, and the first name I saw. This is so peaceful feeling and such wise instructions for us today. Thank you, friend......


Hugs,
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-03-05 11:14 AM


Earth Angel
Thank you my dear. :squeeze;

Sunshine
You are my sunshine,

Chris,
Toast & Marmalade sounds good.

Pat,
Hugs back,

Ethel,
Thank you and hugs and back

Nancy,
Hugs back my dear.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (03-05-2003 11:16 AM).]

littlewing
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14 posted 2003-03-05 11:44 AM


Seymour - reminded me of Ireland  - is beautiful and yes I agree - what a nice read to start my day TY xxoo
Janet Marie
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15 posted 2003-03-05 12:10 PM


Let us speak in terms of peace.
I do not ask you sign a lease.


I only ask you tame your mind.
And let it think in soft of kind.

============================

you are a

  

How long have I been dreaming I could make it right ...
If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might
To be the one you need...

J. Browne

Phantom Poet
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16 posted 2003-03-05 01:01 PM


nice and has interest
>>phantom poet<<

passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-03-05 01:08 PM


as always, a piece of wisdom
Aenimal
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18 posted 2003-03-05 01:11 PM


always enjoy yours sy

JP
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19 posted 2003-03-05 01:14 PM


Wonderful!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-03-05 01:51 PM


littlewing
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

JM,
You are so cute, makes me want to
you you and always

Thank you Phantom.

passing shadows
As always a beautiful reply.

Aenimal,
Thank you my friend.

JP
Thank you for the wonderful.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
21 posted 2003-03-05 04:27 PM


Sy, I was unable to be here for morning tea, but high tea and you this afternoon are a scrumptious delight.

This was just heavenly ... hugs, Marti

Thomas119gold
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22 posted 2003-03-05 04:43 PM


Just let it drift valleys green
With flowers littering the scene.
Lay you down a moment’s bliss
Perhaps with ghost of former kiss.

The Wording
of this poem is fantastic

Thomas

Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2003-03-05 05:38 PM


Marti,
You are a sweetheart.

Thomas,
THank you so much for the read and reply.

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