navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » At Midnight
Open Poetry #25
Post A Reply Post New Topic At Midnight Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:39 AM



Mesmerized, I became
peering into the darkness

The Moon brilliantly danced
upon the diamonds buried
deep within the snow
Reflecting
Oh, The purest white

tinged
with the blood of your prey at midnight

A stifled scream slowly died
as your gaze fell upon mine
Oh, the pity!

Your rugged weary soul
it sang
beside the blood of your prey
At Midnight


© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-03-05 02:41 AM


I love your style...keep on writing!
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-03-05 03:40 AM


Love this, and agree with passing shadows...your style is unique and engrossing!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
3 posted 2003-03-05 06:29 AM


This really goes with the graphic you posted on the board doesn't it Fantastic work.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-03-05 10:08 AM


TY Mysteria - what graphic?
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
5 posted 2003-03-05 11:51 AM


BRAVO! Yes, another midnight poem for midnite's private library collection. THANKS!
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-03-05 02:33 PM


Ty Everyone - you are all much too kind to me xxoo
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » At Midnight

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary