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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-03-05 12:36 PM



Surround yourself in the celestial scent
of sweetest coastal sage
and the essence of ancient yew, as
I touch the innermost spirit,
the deepest heart and soul of you,
within the coolness of an ocean breeze,
feel the moist sand as you kneel on your knees,
hear the whispered wind as it sings through the trees,
feel the warmth of the earth in a golden sunset,
it's a heavenly sensation you'll never forget.
Feel the touch of magic in midnight
and spend your moments in never regret.

And remember to think of me.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-05-2003 12:56 AM).]

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Jason Lyle
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1 posted 2003-03-05 01:43 AM


I always think of you, and your beautiful words............at midnite.
Jason

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-03-05 02:24 AM


Midnite - God this is amazing - I love your writing - it just sings . . . xxoo
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pretty cool!
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4 posted 2003-03-05 02:50 AM


That last line seems to come from no where... yet the poem is incomplete without it. Another amazing write from an amazing talent.
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5 posted 2003-03-05 03:11 AM


Ain't no mojo strong enough to dim the magic of passions resident shaman. Or would that be a shawoman???Enjoyed Kacy ,even if it's only 11:15 here.  

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Midnitesun
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6 posted 2003-03-05 11:36 AM


Jason, in a morning blush, thank you.

littlewing, what a sweet reply. Thank you
so much.

Dixie, glad you enjoyed this midnight poem.

Ringo, yes it's an intentional afterthought, like leaving you with the last fading light you hold onto that carries you from dusk to midnight. Thank you for your time and reply.

Ray, LOL "shawoman."  You are making up new words again, and leaving me with a big morning smile, bent ku style.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-05-2003 11:39 AM).]

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7 posted 2003-03-05 02:17 PM


yes!! i feel it too!!
Midnitesun
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8 posted 2003-03-05 03:25 PM


Michelle, smiling here in thanks. Hope this helps you in your stressful moments. (maybe like a mini-vacation?)
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9 posted 2003-03-06 02:27 AM


i agree with littlewing. this almost seems like a song you want to sing to an old tune, down at the beach.

-majnu
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10 posted 2003-03-06 07:37 AM


Smooth...James
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Very Lovely Midnitesun!

ARCTIC WIND

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