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Ellen
Junior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 35

0 posted 2003-03-04 11:51 PM

Writers Block

Images fading
like summer suntan.
No thoughts of love
between woman and man.
Words seeking freedom
the mind feeling numb.
No fragments, no scraps
not even a crumb.
Buried and hidden
seeking release.
Souls of words
of recent decease.

Ellen~2003

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-04 11:54 PM

I defiently know how this is. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-03-05 12:05 PM

Awesome write!!!! It's a beautiful write and still shows the frustration. I love it!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-03-05 12:10 PM

You have done a great job
when it comes to leaving it unsaid.

I'm pretty much out of crumbs myself,
time to bake bread I guess, or see what's
left to thaw.

Take care Ellen~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-05 02:58 AM

exactly!

Ellen
Junior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 35

5 posted 2003-03-06 08:19 PM

I want to thank all of you for responding to my poem...I am glad you liked it, writers block is for the birds, lol

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-03-08 08:03 AM

Now THAT...
is writer's block!
Stand on it,
and see the stars...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2003-03-08 08:36 AM

I know just how you feel.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2003-03-08 09:15 AM

I can certainly relate to this!
You did a good job expressing how it feels.

Deb

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

9 posted 2003-03-08 09:24 AM

I loved this one. The frustration of it is real!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2003-03-08 02:09 PM

Images fading
like summer suntan.
==================
cool analogy...youre not as blocked as you think

well done poetess Ellen

peace & poetry

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-03-08 03:19 PM

Ellen, I think we can all relate to this one. You wrote about it very well.....

Ethel

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

12 posted 2003-03-08 03:26 PM

I believe this is omething which plagues all of us at times, usually when we most need to express ourselves. SIGH. You captured it well.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-03-08 03:30 PM

You've captured this perfectly!
~Much enjoyed~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Ellen
Junior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 35

14 posted 2003-03-09 11:19 PM

I want to thank each and everyone of you for your kind words, you have made me feel at home here in this forum ....Thanks and Huggggssss to all.

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