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Butterfly Girl

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Sunnyone
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0 posted 03-04-2003 07:29 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone



art by sunny


Butterfly girl, with your head in the clouds
and a glass of love's nectar at hand
Gossamer wings gently flow in the breeze
in your own secret fairytale land...

Your beckoning gaze reaches out to the sky
where your butterfly prince there awaits
In graceful smooth flight, he approaches your smile
Will you welcome his love, deemed by Fate?

One kiss from your lips is the secret wherein
all the boundaries are broken this night
'Twill open the doors to a love that will last
through eternity's endless delight...

Butterfly girl, with your head in the clouds
and your hand holding onto your dreams
Take flight with your heart, never questioning why
Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems...

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

© Copyright 2003 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
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(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Sunnyone, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my flittering vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
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2 posted 03-04-2003 08:18 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

Beautiful post - gets my vote for sure.
carol
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Sunnyone, very good I really liked it

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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I really like the last line! "Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems..." The whole thing's beautiful, and it has my vote! Wonderful write.

That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be.

rkcraig
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5 posted 03-04-2003 09:11 PM       View Profile for rkcraig   Email rkcraig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rkcraig

good work.  Love the last line, love can seem to good to be true.
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6 posted 03-05-2003 12:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Love the poem..love the graphics!
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sensory overload! gorgeous pic - wonderful poem!

i didn't know what to absorb first - great post!

-majnu
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Jason Lyle
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A beautiful submission, my vote for sure.
Jason
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9 posted 03-05-2003 01:52 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Sunny, this is so beautiful. Though I love
it all, you know I like the last line best....
"Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems".
Oh yes, it certainly is.  


Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-05-2003 01:53 AM).]

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NICE!
Sunnyone
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Hi Noah, and I love your pic too!!  Thank you so much!!

Hi Carol, and thank you, as the pleasure is in sharing here!!

Hi Amara, and nice to meet you!! I do appreciate your vote, and am glad you liked it!!

Hi rkcraig, and yes...that last line can be taken several different ways...(I was glad my muse came up with it!!!)  Thank you!

Hi PdV, I'm just learning about graphics, but I love it!! Thank you for appreciating my early efforts in that field!!!

Hi majnu, and it's ok to overload now and then!!!  Kinda gives your muse new ideas!! Thank you so much, my friend!

Hi Jason, and vote accepted with much thanks! Glad you liked this!!!!

Hi Ethel, and yes, as a matter of fact, you and your love crossed my mind after I typed in the last line!!! Thank you so much!

Hi passing shadows, and it's good to have your thoughts here...thank you!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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Oh I am so pleased I found this gem!
Wonderful..much enjoyed!
~Smiles across the pond~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

BluesSerenade
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Your words have a way of
fluttering across the page so gracefully.

Absolutely gorgeous Sunnyone~
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SunnyOne~
Hey gal !
Nice to see this beauty from you~

'never questioning why
Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems...'


Lots of thought in this ... yes, indeed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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One kiss from your lips is the secret wherein
all the boundaries are broken this night
'Twill open the doors to a love that will last
through eternity's endless delight...
=================================

beautiful...rhymes divine and a lovely accent pic...very cool.
Well done Sunny...a lovely write to reflect you in the book

    
peace & poetry

Phantom Poet
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Very breathtaking!!!!
>>phantom poet<<<
Sunnyone
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Hi Enchantress, and I got the smiles from way over there!!!  Thank you so much, and glad you found it, too!

Hi BluesSerenade!! I always wondered as a kid what it would be like to be a butterfly!
My imagination hasn't grown up yet!! LOL!! Thank you for your wonderful reply...it's very appreciated!

Hi Marge...oh, my good friend, you know that I am inspired by the beauty of your work, and that's the truth!!! Thank you so much for stopping by...that is special to me!!

Hi Janet Marie, and I've been doing some work on stabalizing my meter!  As a musician, I sometimes wander when I write lyrics, and it doesn't make sense if you don't hear the notes. So, thank you, as it is nice to know that my efforts may be paying off in writing regular poetry.  I do appreciate your coming by, and your nice reply!!

Hi Phantom Poet, and I enjoyed your reply too!  I was hoping it would have a sort of breathtaking feel to it, so thank you!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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18 posted 03-08-2003 05:32 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

  Oh is my granddaugther ever going to love this one!  I printed it out for her little book, hope you don't mind.  Lovely fantasy.  I enjoyed the rhyme as you don't do that a great deal too often.  

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-08-2003 05:34 PM).]

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enjoy your read
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Butterfly girl, with your head in the clouds
and your hand holding onto your dreams
Take flight with your heart, never questioning why
Love is sometimes as sweet as it seems...


Loving this! art by sunny- is that you? It's beautiful. as were your words. this is going into my library, as well as the book.    
lots of love, gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Sunnyone
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Hi Mysteria, and no, I don't mind a bit, in fact I'm very honoured that you would choose it for your grandaughter!! Thank you..(my grandaughter has a copy of this one, too!)

Hi Vandana, and so glad to see you here!  Thank you...I love getting your replies!!

Hi Gemma, and yes, that's me.  I'm a novice at computer art, but I love playing with it, as the colours and movements are so much fun!
Thank you, and am really glad that you enjoyed this enough for your library!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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Butterfly girl....I like the concept, and admire the execution!
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Magic....lovely painting too hon.....
Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

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Sunnygirl...please send me a copy of the full size of this art...I would love to see it in close up...I enjoyed the thoughts that went with this painting...it is so you...thank you!
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