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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-03-04 04:10 PM

Picture by Alan Ayers

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Your smile brings me sunshine
As it chases away the gloom
You fill my world with color
When you walk into the room

Your smile brings me joy
How you warm my heart and soul
To be in love with you forever
Is ultimately my goal

Your smile has the ability
To warm the coldest heart
How I yearn to be with you
During the times we are apart

I'd climb the highest mountain
And walk farther than a mile
Just to catch a glimpse of
Your warm endearing smile

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-03-04 04:12 PM

I normally don't enjoy rhyming poetry, however yours is so sweetly done, and has such love and joy behind the words...
Very well done

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-04 04:16 PM

Sue..this is so romantic and beautifully penned.
I love the way it flows and your rhyming is superb.
This should be a book submission!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2003-03-04 05:43 PM

sweet write gal..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-03-04 05:51 PM

Now me? I love most forms of poetry...and this made me think of all of the special people and poets who have blessed me with their smiles...

thank you, Sue!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-03-05 04:38 AM

beautiful!

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

6 posted 2003-03-05 12:22 PM

Thank you for blessing me with your smiles in verse!

Shenachie

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-06 09:20 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may your loves smile always shine like the sun in your heart and bring tears of golden joy reflecting the smile to your eyes! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

8 posted 2003-03-12 09:30 PM

Sue~ Enjoyed this very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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