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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-03-04 03:35 PM


Forgive Me Father for I have sinned
it has been eternity
since my last confession

I sit here before you now
seeking repentance
for living my life

I only did
what I felt was right
  
You never told me
that it would be like this
Wait, you did now didnt you?
I didnt listen . . .

Until now

I guess




© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
BlueEyes
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1 posted 2003-03-04 03:40 PM


wow! I think these will be the words spoken by many people come that day....

Enjoyed the read & the wake up call...

BlueEyes

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2 posted 2003-03-04 03:40 PM


wow... talk about reading my life... you're beginning to scare me!!!! lol
Keep up the amazing work, and think about this for the book

GG
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3 posted 2003-03-04 03:44 PM


I don't listen often until trials and tragedy wake me up. No wonder my life is such a mess! no wonder all our lives our. We're stubborn. But I just praise the Lord my sins were taken, past present and future, as He rose again, and now I live too.
Like this alot

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Phantom Poet
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4 posted 2003-03-04 03:47 PM


littlewing you flew away with this one terrfect write
>>phantom poet<<

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-03-04 03:56 PM


Blue - wake up call ding . .  ding . . .
hehehe TY
Ringo - hehehe I scare you - lil ole me nahhh - TY makes me feel good to know you can relate
GG - I agree - suffering forced me to listen sadly and I am still stubborn
Phantom - so sweet - flappin my wings . . . Im tryin . . .

TY GUYS xxoo  

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-03-04 10:13 PM


I dunno what if the problem is not that someone didn't listen but that he doesn't.
hmmm thought provoking
glad you somehow found your way here..

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-03-05 01:47 AM


Raph - I think it is both - mostly timing - you want Him to speak and He wants you to listen - is confusing  - and ahhh . . .  I have no idea how I got here - someone just picked me up one day and sat me here hehehehehe xxoo
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-03-05 03:13 AM


sigh
littlewing
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9 posted 2003-03-05 07:11 PM


TY for the reply Shadows
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