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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-03-04 12:18 PM



Will I get beyond the illusion?

Beyond A & B that we might "C"
more clearly      all?

I've been centered
securely in contrite
for try as I might
selfishness prevails
so I swoon in que
among many pretty flowers
blooming against the wall
hoping for love letters
eluding...

will U get beyond the
illusion?
Beyond the A & B so that
finally we can see

Y?
Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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Georgia
1 posted 2003-03-04 12:25 PM


Intersting way of looking at it
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2 posted 2003-03-04 03:33 PM


This is so creative and deep.
Thank you.
Eric

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Saluting with misty eyes
3 posted 2003-03-04 03:42 PM


This is definately a very creative and new way of thinking about life, alove, and the other stuff...
Well Done

Phantom Poet
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4 posted 2003-03-04 03:45 PM


Wow this is fab!!
>>phantom poet<<

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