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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-04 08:00 AM


I Linger

I stand
beside
your shadow
letting comfort
be your guide
here it is
I wait
for you
lingering
by your side


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-04 09:18 AM


nice thought... I enjoyed

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-03-04 12:23 PM


very nice
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-03-04 01:47 PM


1slick_lady
Simple and right to the point, enjoyed.

Phantom Poet
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4 posted 2003-03-04 01:53 PM


very lingering for the mind
>>phantom poet<<

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-03-04 02:15 PM


Lady - eloquent and beautiful - just what I was feeling today - thank you for putting it into words xxoo
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6 posted 2003-03-04 03:29 PM


Your words linger long and full within.
Thank you.
Eric

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