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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
bent ku Gasping Thrashing Drowning in a sea of me. Live like it's your last day... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
bent - get out of my head - this is just brilliant xxoo |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
thanks little wing but thats not me in there.lol...appreciate your thoughts. Live like it's your last day... |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Short n sweet >>phantom poet<< |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, brilliant! We all at times can certainly drown in a sea of ourselves, it's way too easily done. Perhaps we must go there, now and then, in order to make progress that is ultimately positive. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
bent ku? Love it a original short piece! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A new form! I shall try it.  Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know that violence... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehe bent I know - meant your words - like they came from my own - |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
life raft on the waves   |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I can hear the thrashing and feel the desperation.. get up, take a breath! like the style. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thanks for taking the time to reply,appreciate them all. Live like it's your last day... |
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