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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-03-11 10:56 PM



Although told to forget
I can't put this in the past
My eyes are real, the tears are pure
Rain droplets of life you'd call them

They splash the ground with falling hope
Painting a story of misery and broken amends
Forgotten bonds, Lost trust
Dependency on people fading into past

I look out the window to view oppurtunity
Then to see it shun by clouding fire
Burning to dismiss any fortune
Inside any bearing I held begins to melt away

I can't seem to find my place
Or walk the ground I belong
It's times like these I can't accept
Perhaps I wasn't meant to be

Maybe I live the shadow of another
A half of a whole

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
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1 posted 2003-03-11 11:41 PM


Don't live the shadow of another. Be you. Because you're worthy and exciting on your own. I like the way you use words.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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