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La Guitarra |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Dedicated to Federico Garcia Lorca Begins the crying of the guitar and like a lullaby sung to soothe a fragile soul I close my eyes Submerged, I become in a world only I am aware The weeping it welcomes my weary smile Like Jesus did to Judas Conciousness slips away as I submit to her constant wail like a mother to its child Her arms encircle my mind, my heart, my soul Enraptured I am at ease, for now For in the distance begins the crying of the guitar |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soothing write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
guitars, DO gently weep.... hugs, S. and I swear I'm coming home soon... and hey? hmmm...you'd better be there! I met some scooby snax there earlier...where were you? hmmm?  You write beautifully. I'm proud and happy you are here m'friend. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I enjoyed...reminds me of classical or flamenco guitar .I'm not familar with Lorca but have been comforted and carried away by many guitarist.The line like Jesus did to Judas has a ominous tone to it,kind of thought provoking. Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (03-04-2003 05:19 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you everyone - always good to hear such warm words - xxoo K Scoob is my friend - very cool and where am I - where are you missy - telling me I better be there I outta . . . is nice to be here too |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
bent - wow you picked that out - thats the whole thing right there - my favorite line |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
1 person chatting...all the time...sigh... just ONE MORE DAY...I'll show up with ashes on me head...I promise. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok where are you - K - hehehe - ye Irish like me now lassie - ashes on your head - goodness gracious - one more day - Ive heard that line before . . . you promised -I better see those ashes . . . |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
the power of music and the power of your words equally soothing sweety |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
reads like a somewhat pained lullaby... beautiful. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is beautiful. I love most music, but instrumentals are some of my favorites. I enjoyed reading this.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raphael - sweety much too good to me - TY - meant a lot especially right now *smiling* xxoo Alyssa - perfectly put TY garysgirl - instrumentals mine too TY |
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