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GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj

0 posted 2003-03-04 12:53 PM


I’m thinking about all kinds
Of abstract things
Like loneliness
And Tehran
Perverted versions
Biblical excursions
“aim for the turbans!”
what’s this aversion?

Organized religion has halted the evolution of humanity.

O the audacity!
What a calamity
There’s no spirituality.
Revolutions crumble
Idols incumbency.

Marauding

Repressive and
Alienating.
“On television here a suicide bombing is
called a "martyrdom-seeking operation".
Demonstrating dissent
Lacking intellect
while weeping mothers wait.
Irregular insanity
Spiritual disparity
Fallacies masquerading as truth
Continually flock to the
Invalidity.
Stupidity-
I’m trying to fill a teacup
With a firehouse
Hurling down an
avalanche

*

I LOVE EAGLESCORPION!! RIP
"You will relish in the endless sea of possibilities that is your eternal destiny."

© Copyright 2003 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-03-04 03:09 AM


I am thinking too now
bbent
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 521
Alaska
2 posted 2003-03-04 04:07 AM


I've had a few of those thoughts too.
Good write,moved me.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Phantom Poet
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 116
Arizona USA
3 posted 2003-03-04 04:33 AM


Nicely put
>>phantom poet<<

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-03-04 05:01 AM


This is awesome - just brilliant - very nice flow - and yes sad state for our world to be in indeed xxoo
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2003-03-13 01:51 PM


!  I'm reading Fast Food Nation by Eric Schlosser.. kinda goes with this i guess...

regarding your signature...
. im not dead yet!!!!!!!!! they cant get rid of me!!!! they love me too much! hehehhe

Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble
remembering how to fly.

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