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Strange Magic |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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As a feather lifts like a show of fanfare or a strange magic suspended in air. Drifting in flight on solo wings in the search of the sun around mystic rings. A shudder of joy passing through hands unraveling spells the magic unmanned. Bound by a trend that gathers momentum spirals and dips over backwards bend. Gaining insight rising above outside of the circle waves a wand over love. As a feather lifts like a show of fanfare or a strange magic suspended in air. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very magical...thought-provoking |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
magic can be mystic sometimes >>phantom poet<<< |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, i believe, in magic, too, just dont look for it, ive realized, it comes on its own this is nice and light as a feather |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 The title grabbed me...then I saw your name.. and had I to read, knowing I would love it! And..I do..for my own magical reasons!  ~Smiles, & Hugs,Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this my friend...as always... very nicely done.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It wasn't much but a cheap trick that thrilled me at the time. Thanks for reading me everyone! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lori, I apologize for my belated reply, but I would never miss any of the wonderful shananagans and magic you have to share with us, yay! (kiss on cheek) Abracadabra, a smile upon my face reading this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marvellously magical! ~ May magic continue to fill you with wonder! Warm hugs, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Feathered me with this one, you did. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful words Blues soothing read |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, I loved the feel of seeing a feather floating in the air, and thinking what it would feel like, if it could feel....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Blues - a pleasure to read. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
i enjoy your poetry. this one is magic. Rf |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dixie~ Things are rarely as they seem eh, but that doesn't keep me from being fascinated. hugs~ Magic is a temporary state of mind for sure. Thanks Phantom~ Michele~ So true, it happens when we least expect it to, you got that right. Nancy~ Love that cute little bunny. I'm so glad you liked this. Should have been, over backwards, bending. Dang! TGIF, hugs Cpat~ My shananagans, now that's catchy. Hugs Noah~ and thank you for giving this another go round. Methinks I wonder too much! Nice to see you here EA~ Glad you felt this Kacy, thank you muchly! Nice of you to say so Raph, and thanks for reading me. I like the idea of a feather floating too, just to see how far and how high it will go, you know? I appreciate you Ethel. Hi Chris~ Thank you, the pleasure was all mine. Well now, that was sweet of you Rf~ Thank you sincerely~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Cheap trick, huh? One of my favorite bands.  This was downright fun to read! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
mmmm this was so cool... that floating relaxed feeling... Great pictures in this poem!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm glad you had fun...Duncan~ icequeen~ It's like a dizzy spell or a quick spin, a dream state, pick one. Thanks alot for floating by. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Blues - your words always soothe me just at the right moment TY xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
What great imagery, Lori You have made magic here. Ed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
littlewing~ Timing is everything so they say. Thank you, thank you. wranx~ I was just having one of my spells. Thanks for watching for me. |
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