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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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moments clicking, ticking tock, morphing minutes, dali's clock, sands of time fill the hourglass, mock humanity, watch love pass, blocks on roads, standing still, perpetual circles, trap free will, selfmade mountains, quicksands of fear, escher's steps, move nowhere, stopping time tho, seems to me, only when the crap sticks, while i long to run free, growing older, dimestore lover, come and cure me, under temporary cover, kodak moments, stop the ticking start the clicking flying or kicking? do i even dare to go? [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-04-2003 06:36 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're getting somewhere now! What's your favorite dimestore anyway, I'm just dying to know!  So many good lines in this Michele~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
see youve found coldplay too..excellent words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep! |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
gee-wiz i liked that!! >>phantom poet<<< |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
favorite dimestore? blues? the one where i had an instant moment with some cute boytoy that works at the checkout!!!!!!!!! i have no shame, he's legal, its all good..... did u ever look up and just meet someone's eyes and thought you were gonna die right then and there? raf, coldplay found me, living with a l6 year old boy a bit of a music snob - hes pissed off at me, cause i bought the 8 Mile CD,so i make sure when hes in the car, i blast it at least once, with the windows down |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yeah, go. You'll be surprised how easy it is. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hope you have many more memorable kodak moments while the proverbial clock is ticking! Enjoyed! Have a wonderful day living every precious minute! EA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I eally liked this! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Creative and lyrical....excellent poem! Eric |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I love clocks and a great reference to Dali. I gotta go see his museum. Time is a wonderful thing. Never stops and only we can waste it. Nice read! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I enjoyed this one Jason |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I think this should have one of Eschers pictures right beside it.. I bet you just described what he must have been thinking... just going nowhere and still travelling... But then, you don't need the picture there because you have described it so well. great write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like natures clock is ticking, but you know what they say ... as it keeps on it takes a licking! Maybe you are in another time zone? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
gg........thanks i wish i knew how to do that sometimes, i stil cant even figure out how to type in color, on this board hmmmm.....i see someone is getting a little fresh here,........licking? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very clever I enjoyed the rhythms of your ticking clock LOved this! Liz |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"trap free will," I love that line...someday I will find that hugs M |
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