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She Speaks The Wind
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She Speaks The Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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She Speaks The Wind ~*Marge Tindal*~  She speaks the wind that moves ‘cross the plains gifting me with promise of wisdom’s refrain Voice of the Ancients in SkyLara’s song Always … she brings the sweet message home~ She speaks the wind in movement of trees chanting the past on each wafting breeze Willows bow down to kiss the sweet earth wave of their branches in dance of mirth~ She speaks the wind on a soft moment’s snare Leaves this vessel full … with prophecy to share Then in a heartbeat, she billows away cadence of willows left in the sway~ I can only listen … and follow her heed Pour of the wisdom … in this time of need Impart of Spirits on SkyLara’s breath Poof, she’s gone … the stories are left~ I quest for her knowledge on stir of the wind Knowing … knowing … She will come again~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-03-2003 09:43 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge my sis...you have the power of many a muse, and I think, they have much more, because of you. Heart hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I knew from the title what muse would be whispering on the wind...one of my fave of yours ...she as wise as the wind.  lovely Marge!! |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
wow!!! i'm speachless great work >>phantom poet<< |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Marge, as are all of your poems.  Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love your inspiration and the free flowing nature. Your poetry is resilient and gives me hope Marge. She speaks the wind in movement of trees chanting the past on each wafting breeze *beautiful* |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
She speaks the beautiful words that touch us all... Nicely done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the whole thing...words, layout, font...just damn beautiful! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful Marge -- No one shares the prophecy or wisdom better than you when handed to you on the wind by Skyelara. Thank you for sharing this with us ... Marti |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
The title spoke to me at first and I am glad that I looked this one up, this is such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing Andrew |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My soul cries out for more... ~ May the grace and beauty of both the seen and unseen worlds continue to breathe their magic into your essence... Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetryFriends~ You all are just the greatest ! Thank you for your lovely comments on SkyeLara's speak~  She moves through me with a certainty of voice that I simply MUST share~ I appreciate having Passions' word-place to do so~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"She speaks the wind on a soft moment’s snare Leaves this vessel full … with prophecy to share" amazing! i could feel, and hear the message! Rf |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
She speaks the wind on a soft moment’s snare Leaves this vessel full … with prophecy to share Then in a heartbeat, she billows away cadence of willows left in the sway~ Marge, and still you bring us the messages...you share the visions... thank you dear lady...HUGS |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
She speaks the wind on a soft moment’s snare Leaves this vessel full … with prophecy to share Then in a heartbeat, she billows away cadence of willows left in the sway~ Marge the prophecies are passed down through you and your message that you share. This is so very Margeiful lovely!! I must have had my momma's will |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm so glad she's speaking... and that you're listening. *S* I've missed you both! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, That is why I'm so careful when I talk to the wind. Just lovely.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I thank you ALL so very much for enjoying the *gift-words* of SkyeLara. She comes and bids me listen ... and so I do~ *SuthernGal and Marti*~ I 'know' that she 'knows' you quietly await her offerings~ Ahem ! Seymour~ Now you KNOW your Mama told you not to pass wind~   *Huglets* from the Florida rainclouds~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thank you for sending me the link to this haunting poem! I'm so glad I didn't miss it and I seldom go to Open! No one can write this type of poetry, like you do! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
LOVED this! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Where ya been hiding?? I love this the title drew me in and the words captured me....as always Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I thank each of you sooooooooo much for your thoughtful replies~ SkyeLara has been singing to me for days now ... there will be more~ Honest Injun ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~GreenEyes I sort of hang out mostly at the Corner Pub these days ... thanks for catching me out in the Open ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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