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Something Shared ( 4000th Post)
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Something Shared ( 4000th Post) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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Something Shared He took me to a special place Not many he has shown Where the river bed now is seen And the weeds have over grown. But through his eyes I saw it change To what it once had been The water cool and rippling Dry grass turned emerald green. Gently by my hand he led me then Back through his favorite years Of sun-kissed days and starry nights And secrets no one hears. His laughter echoed through the woods And intertwined with mine Just like two kids of long ago When everything was fine. And by the smile that lit his face I understood his need To walk this place of childhood Where memories are freed. Thank you, dear for showing me A place that means so much. And in return, I'll share with you A love no one can touch. ~~~~~~~~~~ ~Chris Barker~ Sept. 1988 ~~~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so very beautiful Chris. Congratulations sweetie! |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
wow! beautiful words, passionate heartfelt feelings.. enjoyed immensely. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Donna. this was actually written for my hubby long before we wed. He was so excited for me to see this special place that he and his friends explored in their youth. When we got there....all had changed..as things do with time. He was disappointed. But, we walked together and I asked him to describe it to me as it once was. It was a wonderful afternoon. I just had to write about it for him. Now I am sharing it with others. hugs  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
sweetwater - thankyou! If I missed saying it already..Welcome to Passions! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Congratulations Chris...4,000 post is a a great milestone...and the post you used to mark the occasion is truly inspired...A special place shared with a special person with special memories to mark a special event...well done.. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (03-03-2003 03:05 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is so beautiful...not only the poem, but the story behind. Isn't it wonderful to share your memories with your loved one and to have them share their's with you? Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris--A touching poem that makes me wonder if those special places should be left in memory, away from change. But then the sharing was what made it special...and the poem.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sweet little sister..you already know how I feel about this piece.. and the guy who inspired it. Beautiful write..by a beautiful sister! Congratulations on your 4,000th post! ~Hugs, luv and miss ya, Teed!~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Gently by my hand he led me then Back through his favorite years Of sun-kissed days and starry nights And secrets no one hears. such a warm and loving poem, Chris ~smiling M |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely words. Joyce |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
scorpio - thankyou for reading and commenting.  Ethel - Yes it truly is. Thankyou. Martie - thankyou dear poetess for your warm words. Nancylee - yes, you do know...you know? oh, dear let's do that again...lol. Thankyou dear sister of mine. Maureen - I am so glad you enjoyed. Thanks! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Joyce...you snuck in while I was responding to others comments. Thankyou dear lady. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now how did you get to 4000 posts so quickly? Oh yes, I know... by posting lovelies, and enjoying life! Hugs, you! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - thankyou so much sweet poetess....yes the time has flown by. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! And may he always share heaven with you and may his smiles forever be the sunlight that beams through the forest! (kiss on cheek) Yay, CONGRATULATIONS ON 4000, I LOVE THIS!!! Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  Mya love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - thanks sweetie - you always say the nicest things. vandana - thankyou! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But through his eyes I saw it change To what it once had been The water cool and rippling Dry grass turned emerald green. Gently by my hand he led me then Back through his favorite years Of sun-kissed days and starry nights And secrets no one hears. ============================= Chris, this is the sweetest poem..Im sure your husband loved seeing it thru your eyes of love too... very cool..so glad you shared it..made me smile. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
opppps...i forgot to say congrats on your milestone |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Janet Marie - thankyou so much. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Nicely said and i'm sure the memorys linger >>phantom poet<< |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~Congratulations to you Chris~ This was a beauty of a poem to commemorate your shining moment. Lovely writing, every word of it! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Such a beautiful story, so well written. Jason |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
This is a beautiful, touching story Chris. I felt as if I were right there with you enjoying the beauty, thanks for sharing |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Chris, this is beautiful, my friend. Congratulaions on your 4,000th post and hugs to you. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - a beautiful writing from a beautiful person... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Night - how utterly touching - reminded me of my stepdad - TY for bringing me there xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! congrats on 4000! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
To all of my Passion's friends, I thankyou for enjoying this true story that I have tried to convey in poetry. hugs to all!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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