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Taming the Wind
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Taming the Wind |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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 Taming the Wind All twirlygigged and twist of arm can you see it in the flay the branch is bent this way and that and the wings all feather perfect are open laying on the finest thread a clean swoop onto the branch that caught the triangle tissue in despair how find the flow and how repair It’s in a grace that feels the pull though just a string it catches fold of how the current speaks like dance and hand on small of back just so seduces the movement into flow yet from watch of day all blue on blue how catch and hold the play or find the perfect tale to spin again into the feel like that on this earthbound today |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It’s in a grace that feels the pull though just a string it catches fold of how the current speaks like dance and hand on small of back just so seduces the movement into flow ok. ok...I figured it out....ya gotta live in California to write like this.... very well done Martie, and as always, so very enjoyed.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well Donna if thats what it takes then lets GO... think Martie will take us to the beach?  Martie-Girlie..you find inspiration in the coolest places...either that or poetry follows you where ever you go. love your blue on blue  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem and picture, Martie. I love to fly kites, too...  Hugs, Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You just catch it every time -- the personal part of the scene. Dunno how you do it so beautifully..... it just seems to shine out of you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When anyone has said to me, "Go fly a kite"---I have complied with pleasure! This is a delightful read for a delightful pasttime! ~ May your spirits soar with the paper dragons... Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
or find the perfect tale to spin again ..tongue in cheek? beautiful picture and feel to your words. M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What ya say Martie, will you take Jan and I to the shore? Oh world...look out, this would be an event of a lifetime!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You get here and you'll be there!! Promise! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can I come too??!! I'll bring my own kite!  This is beautiful sweet Martie...so beautiful. Perfect picture for the perfect poem too. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The photo is at a lake..just five minutes from my house..the shore would take about 45 minutes..you can all come with me to both places...deal? |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - saring at the shores sounds like roaring fun to me - so well written - just lovely poetry - Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and the child becomes a bit more with the wind, and realizes... just who has been seduced... lovely, lovely, lovely... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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