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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-03 11:42 AM



I Can't Recall

I can't recall the last kiss,
the one that spoke
more to me than words.

I can't recall the last touch
of arms around, that would
show me the feelings in your heart.

~~*~~

I can't recall togetherness,
when here I sit alone.
But I recall the lost look in eyes,
the look I should have known.

~~*~~

I can't recall the moment that
I could put one love behind me,
and open up to another.

I can't recall how it was that
I could let you overwhelm my life,
and make each morning worthwhile.

~~*~~

I can't recall, exactly how
nor the moment when,
I met you once or maybe twice
and fell in love again.

~~*~~

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-03-03 12:08 PM


Well, I can't recall the first thing I read of yours, but it rang so true I knew I'd have to read everything you post.
Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-03-03 12:47 PM


I can't recall, exactly how
nor the moment when,
I met you once or maybe twice
and fell in love again.

This is utterly perfect! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-03-03 12:55 PM


sigh...thoughts known well by me...
rkcraig
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4 posted 2003-03-03 01:22 PM


You write sooo good.
jellybeans
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5 posted 2003-03-03 02:03 PM


I do see why we are kindred spirits...sigh
wonderful write

vandana
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6 posted 2003-03-03 02:08 PM


oh yeah i can relate this enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-03-05 06:51 AM


Midnitesun, you are very sweet. Thank you for reading and responding. *s

Nightshade, it's nice when someone can feel your words. Thank you.


passing shadows, always on my mind too.  Thank you Dixie.

rkcraig, I appreciate your responses.

jellybeans, I am glad you think so. When I read yours I feel as if you know me.

vandana, it's good to relate, once in awhile

hugs all
M

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-03-05 01:46 PM


thankfully love IS revolving door, one closes
the other opens, IF you allow it to enter again, sweet poem

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