Yes, it does change in form and flow and thought.
Though I beg to differ on your assessment of content, if I do look at it from a self-rejecting/denial point of view, it initally makes me laugh, but I can see what you might mean; tho. that was not and is not my intent. That it mirrors many of life's issues, probably true, and, again, suppose it could reflect internal conflicts.
A young neighbor visited me for awhile and she is smitten with someone who works at same company. She is quite heart sick.....for he hasn't made much, to very little, attempt to get involved, yet she (thinks) she is madly in love. This poem came about after her visit with me, and my sugestion to her to let it go awhile.
I enjoy other people's thoughts regarding poetry....thank you.
Thanks for reading and the respond.
Hugs to you both, Pat
..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..