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A Shifting Shadow

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regards2you
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25 posted 03-07-2003 08:13 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you


Icequeen,

Thank you. Glad you mentioned the two poems and that they do work. I was really unsure; I simply have a hard time critiquing my own, (or anyone's) work. Again, thanks and glad you like this. You have 153 posts and I don't think I've read  you, for I would have remembered your username. I'll look for your work.

Hugs to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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26 posted 05-31-2003 01:52 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

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27 posted 05-31-2003 10:43 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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28 posted 06-11-2003 12:26 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Yes....this is what we lost....nothing else needs to be said.

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29 posted 06-11-2003 11:06 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PatMYFRIEND~

'I'll fly the flight of wounded
And sing love's song awhile
To the universal shore
A broken heart, beguiled.

Listen to my heartbeat's rhythm
Glad it's free once more
You were soul flirting with my mind
Mere vagabond of poet's lore.

Please, go upon hell's happy way
I'll grab grace's grin, be healed
You a shallow, shifting shadow
But a ghost in my mind's reveal.'


In shadows change of rearrange
your spirit now soars free
Come of peace and ye shall find
poetic wings of angelic kind~

May His wisdom guide you to more peaceful places~
He works His wonders in our lives~
Bless you, Pat~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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30 posted 06-21-2003 08:58 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Pat~
These comments are my honest OPINION ... not 'judgements' in any way !

I'm coming back in on this one to say that you are one remarkable FRIEND !
You've faced unfair adversity and still rise above those who would put you down~

You ARE BRIGHT !!
You ARE SPIRITUAL !!
You ARE FRIENDSHIP TRUE !!

Those who would hurt you intentionally just don't know what 'true friendship' means.
Friendship works two ways ... give and take, I believe you have demonstrated fairly your side of that coin.

I pray continually for you and even harder for those who feel it is their purpose to deny your friendship for their own selfish movtives.
God help them ... for He has already helped you by showing you their true colors.

I have read EVERY poem by you ... EVERY comment by others ... EVERY response by you ... (yes, even the deleted ones).

You've suffered enough, my friend.
Go and be free !  You were wronged and it appears that those throwing stones should see themselves as God will see them.

It is MY OPINION that God is a greater leveler in life than others may be aware of.

I am true friend .. I will not leave you in your time of need.  He has given me the gift of your hand in mine ... I treasure that.

My God further bless you and enrich your life, my friend~
Whatever path you take ... keep writing ... you have things that need to be share with others~
Sincerely~
~*Marge*~


Okay ?

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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31 posted 07-24-2003 04:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal



Giving this one a boost for a friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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32 posted 05-16-2004 08:54 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I'm feeling the inspiration
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