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jellybeans
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0 posted 2003-03-03 10:44 AM


a hardened lump
of black mixed with
ashen gray

at first sight, cold and
confrontational, daring
any spark to cause flame

appearances perjure
themselves

buried deep
rekindle awaits
love’s impassioned
touch

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-03-03 11:04 AM


nicely done my friend... and a bit softer than others of late...  I enjoyed


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-03-03 11:10 AM


appearances perjure
themselves


loved it..the whole poem...says alot to me,
only I am not so sure I can be rekindled anymore.
M

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3 posted 2003-03-03 11:26 AM


kinda romantic :-) cool....

great job!

KS

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-03-03 11:50 AM


jellybeans
Well done, enjoyed.

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-03-03 11:52 AM


So much meaning. Well done and thank you for reminding me.  

Susan

jellybeans
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6 posted 2003-03-03 01:58 PM


cpat, tis a sad commentary that one with such sharp angles is still softer than the ones before....thank you my friend

M, ah, I do understand, and sometimes think the same of myself...it is our protective shell, and sometimes, it takes something momentuous to break it...thank you for your comments

ks thank you  

seymore, a well done from you kind sir, is a well done indeed  

susan thank you, glad you enjoyed

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (03-03-2003 02:00 PM).]

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