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vandana
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0 posted 2003-03-03 10:07 AM


The love I have
Inside Is true
I love you deeply
No matter what you do
No matter where you go
I still love you
Because the love I have
Inside my heart
I love you deeply
No matter what you say
I will still love you
The song we wrote It together
It meant to be together
The words we say
It Is true
It comes my heart
And you know
It Is true
That I love you still
The love I have
Inside Is true
It comes my heart
No matter you say
Nor what you do
I will still love you
I won't let my love for you
Die
I won't let It go
I won't let my love for you
Lie
Because The love I have
Inside Is true
I won't lie to you
Because I promise that this love
I have got Inside my heart
Is true
And won't get part
Till we die
The love I have for you

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-03-03 10:13 AM


Lovely! Wonderful true, unconditional love.
Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-03-03 10:13 AM



This is a song
in itself, Vandana,
and it is
quite lovely...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-03-03 10:39 AM


vandana
Enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-03 10:43 AM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and I know with all my heart you are going to make that special someone so very happy forever as the love in your heart is sincere and you shine always with the friendship! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-03-03 10:45 AM


Very very lovely Vandana!
Much enjoyed...
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-03-03 11:43 AM


It's wonderful to feel that way *S
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-03-2003 11:43 AM).]

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-03-03 01:11 PM


oh vandana...such a beautiful write! I enjoy reading the love you write about

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (03-03-2003 01:12 PM).]

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-03-03 02:25 PM


Really like the feeligs here...James
garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-03-03 02:32 PM


Vandan, this is such a sweet, heart-felt write. Very pretty, friend....

Heat Hugs,
Ethel

rkcraig
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10 posted 2003-03-03 02:32 PM


beautiful work. very much enjoyed
vandana
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11 posted 2003-03-03 04:39 PM


thank you all for reading this poem

[This message has been edited by vandana (03-03-2003 04:40 PM).]

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