Early Rising (A Tanka, Maybe)

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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-03-03 08:04 AM

Early Rising
~ By Sue ~

In early rising
Thoughts are in my head of you
Of things that haunt me
The reason why is not there
Those thoughts are slowly leaving

3-3-03

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-03-03 08:18 AM

Sue,

This is so true to life. Wishing you well.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-03 08:41 AM

Boy you were up early Sue..or late last night!
Very well done and very true.
Thanka for the tanka.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

3 posted 2003-03-03 08:49 AM

Yes, tis a tanka and truly touching.
wishing you well with hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-03-03 09:12 AM

(sigh) Oh Sue, this is very well and honestly expressed, dearest friend, I too know the haunting feeling and I only hope soon a warm afterglow will change that, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-03-03 09:15 AM

SmartChick
An interesting write, enjoyed.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-03-03 09:50 AM

enjoyed it a lot

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-03 10:05 AM

awakening slowly to one's heart and then to a contrasting reality...sad

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-03-03 10:50 AM

No maybe about it...
a Tanka, indeed!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2003-03-03 10:58 AM

eventually you won't worry so much about him and thoughts of him Sue..you will worry more about yourself...

hugs
M

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