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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-03-03 06:40 AM


Let Me In

Miki let me in.
I'm more than eager
to kiss you again.
Did you miss me.
Are you desiring
to kiss me?
I miss the passion
of your kiss.
I yearn to taste
the nectar of your lips.
Miki I want to
hold you tight
and have you melt
into my arms
just like we
did last night.
While we lingered
in sweet embrace.
When I kissed
your lips while I
caressed the softness
of your face.
Miki I'm back and
ready to begin
precisely at the
place where last
night came to
an end.

JamesLee
March03
2003

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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
1 posted 2003-03-03 08:54 AM


ahhhh Miki you had better respond and not let him get away
smiles, James
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
2 posted 2003-03-03 08:57 AM


James,

This was so sweetly penned!  I hope she understands what she has...

Susan

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3 posted 2003-03-03 09:17 AM




(smiles) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, I sure hope Miki understands too as she would be crazy to dismiss this! (big hugggssssss) This is a very heartfelt and sincere write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-03-03 09:19 AM


James,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

vandana
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5 posted 2003-03-03 09:50 AM


good write
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2003-03-03 10:02 AM


Very sweet and romantic ....
nice rhythm.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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7 posted 2003-03-03 09:42 PM


So very romantic and yearning - excellent - felt like that many times . . . xxoo
Ellen
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8 posted 2003-03-03 10:29 PM


A lovely, romantic write, she better get back to you before someone else grabs you. lol
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-03-04 04:49 AM


sigh
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