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BlackWolf
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0 posted 2003-03-03 06:07 AM


Listen to the forest
It knows where you are
It knows where you need to be
Of all it sees

Comfort with the wind
It carries souls to final destination
So many voices stained in history
So many words never heard
Only wispers come to loathe
For many men who have died for us
They still live among the trees
Still breath by might of wind
Ever slightly from our plane

Learn a new lesson
Come away to soundless music
And listen for sweet notes
Played at a slightly higher wavelength
Just above human concievability
But if you open your eye
Minus the two that is seen
And open the third
The real sense of sight
You’ll hear those sweet sounds
Floating on wind
Just as a passerby

Listen to the wind
To sounds of soul’s weep  
They know who you are
Of all they see.



© Copyright 2003 BlackWolf - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-03-03 07:45 AM



Black Wolf, ~Welcome to Passions~

I like this very much. Look forward to seeing more of your poetry.


Enjoyed, Pat

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        "Desiderata"

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-03-03 10:00 AM


Beautiful .... it seems that the forest is your element. I hear the sounds and whispers.
Margherita

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3 posted 2003-03-03 10:06 AM



I like your membership name...
and I enjoy your poetry.

Well done!

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4 posted 2003-03-03 12:37 PM




(big hugggssssss) This had me thinking of the Trail of Tears, dearest friend, sadly so many souls voices were never heard and we must pause and consider listening to them as we can still find peace between another and never again will we have to walk on, be exiled, or feel contained! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet BlackWolf, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-03-03 01:17 PM


very mystical write...I like it
rkcraig
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6 posted 2003-03-03 01:20 PM


Well, I'm going hiking today.  Excellent work.
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