navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » a view
Open Poetry #25
Post A Reply Post New Topic a view Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
S Arthur Grey
Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2003-03-03 12:14 PM


a view



I wake with out much comfort
unless I’ve dreamt of you
and it matters not the content
as long as I’ve had that view

to see you there beside me
somewhere along the route
and it matters not the context
because in you I have no doubt

that if we were here together
there would not be this pain
and it matters not the concert
by which we would lift our bane








© 022403

© Copyright 2003 S Arthur Grey - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-03-03 12:17 PM


B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L  !!! ...h
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
2 posted 2003-03-03 12:22 PM


nicely written!
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-03-03 02:28 AM


Arthur - my heart to you - I have the same dilemma lovely xxoo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-03-03 05:11 AM


powerfully sad...but deeply beautiful
GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
5 posted 2003-03-03 05:44 AM


mmm beautiful. you grab me with this and pull me in with your sorrowed feelings, deep emotions and fantastic rhyme.. wow

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
6 posted 2003-03-03 12:41 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I too have this same curse, dearest friend, I dream ever so much of my ghost love and I want so much to finally see her face to reassure me I will not die lonely! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » a view

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary