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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Silence You stand there Ranting, raving, Fist clenching. As I lay here Weeping, broken, Knowing, when to be silent. Your menacing, dark eyes Glaring, radiating, Hot anger, burning my eyes. My frozen eyes, Defrosting tears Upon my broken body. My heart beating wildly, Sending life's blood Throughout, my ice cold veins. I lay here watching, Hoping, praying, Feeling relief. Your menacing, dark eyes Glance defiantly, As your ignorant ass Walks out the door. Ellen 2003 [This message has been edited by Ellen (03-02-2003 10:03 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Only to wind up asking ourselves why should we care! That's the tricky part. Enjoyed your first post. Welcome Ellen! |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
BluesSerenade Thank you very much for your comment, yes that is the tricky part... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ellen, this is such a heartaching debut, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope all is well now, I know this menacing feeling! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ellen, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Thank you Nightshade for the warm welcome |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Thank you very much Noah for the Biggg Huggg. Yes, every thing is okay now, thank you for caring. You have already inspired me by writing this beautiful comment...Bless you and God be with you always...Ellen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maybe that door will assist His Ignorance in understanding? |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Midnitesun, Thanks for responding, that door and that part of my life remains closed. A person can only take so much and I took more than my share. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ellen - I think you know my ex - painfully beautiful xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez, this is so sad for me...a memory long ago... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Silence does weigh heavy... Welcome to Passions, Ellen! Karilea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
like the way you wrote the last two lines...I was thinking similar thoughts...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passions, Ellen. This touches my heart. Please remember one thing! You don't have to put up with this kind of treatment. And, if for some reason you can't leave, there is help out there. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Ellen! Enjoyed your first post.. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This sounds familar!! Welcome to Passions! Susan |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Silence is golden and welcomed after one such as he is gone... Let him remain outside Welcome, dear lady Ellen hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I truly enjoyed this, was the title caught my eye.Very nice write.Welcome. /pip/Forum77/HTML/000135.html Jason |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
littlewing...Lol, I don't think so, thanks for your response |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Passing Shadows I am very sorry that this poem brought back sad memeories for you. I hope you are in a non-abusive relationship now...Life is too short to put up with someone like this....Thanks for reading and commenting |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Sunshine; Thank you for your warm welcome, I am so happy that everyone here has been so friendly. It really surprised me to get this many comments, thank you, all |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
JamesMichael Thank you, I am glad you liked it...Yes, I kind of like the end too, I'm not one to use many bad words in a poem but I thought this one deserved something...Thanks again...Take care |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
SmartChick Thank you for the welcome, I am pleased to be here. I am glad I touched your heart with this write, don't worry about me, he is gone and there will never again be someone like that in my life...Thanks for caring, xoxoxo  |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Enchantress; Thank you very much for the welcome, you all have been so sweet, I have never been in a forum where everyone has something positive to say. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem, take care. |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Susan Caldwell, Thanks for your reply Do you mean it sounds familiar because you read it before , or from the content of the poem? I had this posted in another poetry forum. Thanks for reading |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Thank you Cher for the wecome, glad to be here |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
Jason Lyle; I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for the nice welcome. |
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